now that i've uploaded it, i see that it could use some work with the focal.

Just marathon-ed Sword of art online. felt inpired.

try 2:


This post was edited by PumperNickle on Jul 29 2013 05:04am

2nd is over sharpened
awful colors
don't use text when trying to make signatures
read tutorials
you can't use a border unless you're a special someone.

Read these

http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=67913837&f=246

1) most important fault is the composition. reason: none of the effects really seem to fit and the colour choice is pretty bland/boring/bad.
2) the text and border dont work
here's how to improve: work on making everything fit, and make sure keep trying.