blending seems off
and it's really dark
could use some solid effects like c4ds maybe?
idk

This post was edited by Arcaeus on Jul 20 2013 08:02pm

It has c4d's just very subtle ones, maybe it could use more of them.
Its really not dark for me although other people expressed this issue as well but I think it has something to do with different screen brightness as I have it turned up alot on my end.
I agree on the count of the bad blending, horrible random lens flare

I have the same issue with brightness. The display on my laptop is darker than the one on my desktop and sometimes I'll go for a brighter looking signature on the laptop and get blinded when I see it on the desktop.

I agree with him though it is really dark.

Solid c4ds? or just effect ones o.o
and some foreground shit wouldn't hurt

Solid, with some clipping masks and blending though.

V2 might be better.

that lighting looks fake


This post was edited by Arcaeus on Jul 20 2013 09:11pm

Indeed it does, had to do something about it though, could not have that random lens flare there.

idk just scrap it and move onto the next maybe?