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#1
Jul 1 2013 07:19pm
just finished this a bit ago. Let me know what you think.




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Jul 1 2013 07:33pm
Quote (jstiller30 @ Jul 1 2013 05:19pm)
just finished this a bit ago.  Let me know what you think. 

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/180/7/3/stone_building_by_jstiller30-d6b7vt5.jpg


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Very nice work :thumbsup:
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Jul 1 2013 07:34pm
The perspective & sizing seems strange.
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Jul 1 2013 07:39pm
The pavestone/floor looks odd, looks like it's going downhill instead of being level
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Jul 1 2013 07:46pm
Quote (shieron @ Jul 1 2013 05:39pm)
The pavestone/floor looks odd, looks like it's going downhill instead of being level


yea. I kinda screwed that up a bit. I should have drawn guidelines for the stones to keep them in perspective. That is my main problem with it.
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Jul 1 2013 07:54pm
Quote (jstiller30 @ Jul 2 2013 01:46pm)
yea. I kinda screwed that up a bit.  I should have drawn guidelines for the stones to keep them in perspective.  That is my main problem with it.


just keep making stuff and try to improve the things that you've identified yourself, and educate yourself on how pro's do the things that you are not so good at.

It looks like you have a foundation & the desire to complete work, so just keep on doing it.
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#7
Jul 1 2013 09:20pm
Quote (shieron @ Jul 1 2013 07:39pm)
The pavestone/floor looks odd, looks like it's going downhill instead of being level


this, other than that pretty dece job.


the distant bushes kinda through it off for me though :/
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