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Apr 21 2013 09:43am
Hey, I need some critique on some of my work (school project). Maybe I missed something, maybe it looks terrible.. Please lmk your opinion so I know where I stand :)

1 dias


2 dias


3 dias (I want to tell some of the processes)
http://i.imgur.com/I3FBe57.png

4 dias, I need to insert 3 pictures of some Egyptian sculptures. Iøm just not sure where and how to make it look good. Maybe someone could show me examples :)



Thanks guys.
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Apr 21 2013 10:19am
I don't really like the look of the signs, especially in the 3rd one.

Lighting in the third one doesn't make much sense, the sun would be shining on the road, and the lights hardly light anything up.

The road is incredibly pixellated.

Everything looks low quality, but that might just be from hosting it on imgur.
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Apr 21 2013 10:40am
:P

For the Third One I'd Do 3 Things
1) On the Road Where It Says 1379, Make that More Apparent
2) Lighten Up The Road
3) Maybe For the Sun Add the Lens Flare Effect.. Which Causes Those "Rings" To Appear That the Actual Sun Makes.. That'd Make it Looks More Realistic :D
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Apr 21 2013 11:46am
Quote (sicklad @ 21 Apr 2013 17:19)
I don't really like the look of the signs, especially in the 3rd one.

Lighting in the third one doesn't make much sense, the sun would be shining on the road, and the lights hardly light anything up.

The road is incredibly pixellated.

Everything looks low quality, but that might just be from hosting it on imgur.



Sadly it's very pixlated because of imgur..
And I just added the planet and sun in the very ending just to see how it looks. So I need to fix the lightning indeed. Maybe just remove it and keep that black empty space?

Quote (GraySmoke @ 21 Apr 2013 17:40)
:P

For the Third One I'd Do 3 Things
1) On the Road Where It Says 1379, Make that More Apparent
2) Lighten Up The Road
3) Maybe For the Sun Add the Lens Flare Effect.. Which Causes Those "Rings" To Appear That the Actual Sun Makes.. That'd Make it Looks More Realistic :D



Thanks, I will make the text more apparent and lighten up the road. And good idea about the lens flare :)
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