Hello guys. I'm really bad at this stuff I'm trying to make atm.. So that's why I came to you guys for some assistance!

I made this so far.. Tear it apart and tell me what to remake etc.. I wan't it to look good and professional. I need to make like 3 different once - one with modern art etc..

so this is the Egyptian one

http://i.imgur.com/8sk98iO.jpg

I can't show this off to my teacher, please, help me xD

Looks like you just rushed on it. take your time.

the pictures look choppy;poorly rendered , and there's a white space on the very right one.
i also believe you could do without that huge stroke.

This post was edited by INaga on Apr 18 2013 02:59pm

Okay I'll render them better and remove the stroke around them.

But what about the overall design, do you have some ideas at what I could do? I probably have to remake the whole thing.

Tell us more about the project; what are these 3 images exactly for?

And is it college or high school? If it's high school, I doubt your teacher will care much

high school project.

I'm trying to make a time line with photo manipulations.

I'm starting with the Egyptian king Akhenaten since there's some photo manipulation related stuff with him

I'm then moving on to Platon I think - Then the Golden Age - Then Then WWII/Cold War because Stalin and Hitler manipulated with pictures to remove certain people from the history etc..

So Iøm trying to make a few slides and I just want it to look good and professional .. But I've never tried this kind of stuff before lol

What's the assignment? Nazi propaganda is a massive subject on it's own!

Well, I'm just going to show the history of manipulation how it all started and where we at now. How we live in a world with manipulation like.. everywhere these days
So the old stuff with stain and the golden age is just a few minutes each.

http://i.imgur.com/ESUKTvQ.png

I have made this.. But idk..

Give me some good ideas doodies

this is what I've got so far. Got any ideas you guys? please, help me

imgur screwed with the quality btw

This post was edited by LazyDazy on Apr 19 2013 10:12am

that's a horrid font, use a tamer one

I don't really understand the project

This post was edited by TerrapinStation on Apr 19 2013 10:30am