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Mar 19 2013 11:41am
looking for some harsh cnc... change of font?

Idk if im liking the top square things yet... and I want a way to divide the text ( like how the white line was used maybe without the line ? ) idk im drawing blanks...

any help is appreciated.


sorry for huge image:

http://i.imgur.com/q6OuGmz.jpg
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Mar 19 2013 12:00pm
Looks good imo. I think your name, or at least or second name, should be a lot bigger. This is all about you after all!

edit; also I see no need in putting 'recent works by'



This post was edited by CHurley on Mar 19 2013 12:01pm
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Quote (CHurley @ Mar 19 2013 12:00pm)
Looks good imo. I think your name, or at least or second name, should be a lot bigger. This is all about you after all!

edit; also I see no need in putting 'recent works by'


thanks m8

ima take that out and ill increase font size.

what do you think about the title and boxes surrounding it?
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Mar 19 2013 12:07pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Mar 19 2013 07:05pm)
thanks m8

ima take that out and ill increase font size.

what do you think about the title and boxes surrounding it?


looks good imo
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Mar 19 2013 01:13pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Mar 19 2013 01:41pm)
looking for some harsh cnc... change of font?

Idk if im liking the top square things yet... and I want a way to divide the text ( like how the white line was used maybe without the line ? ) idk im drawing blanks...

any help is appreciated.


sorry for huge image:

http://i.imgur.com/q6OuGmz.jpg


I c you used Edmondsan
check the spacing between the letters of Ativan Altar bruh
if anything, select all and under Character > tracking > Optical rather than metric or anything else

Dunno what the feel was of the type you were going for, but i'd suggest a different typeface altogether, but edmondsan might be able to pull it off if there's a lighter family

Just from a layout perspective, try playing with the value of the title boxes. I see the black and white, and it's a headache although the idea is nice
will this be printed?
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Mar 19 2013 01:28pm
Quote (TheShattered @ Mar 19 2013 01:13pm)
I c you used Edmondsan
check the spacing between the letters of Ativan Altar bruh
if anything, select all and under Character > tracking > Optical rather than metric or anything else

Dunno what the feel was of the type you were going for, but i'd suggest a different typeface altogether, but edmondsan might be able to pull it off if there's a lighter family

Just from a layout perspective, try playing with the value of the title boxes. I see the black and white, and it's a headache although the idea is nice
will this be printed?


yes printed

what do you suggest for the black and white?

any suggestions for layout/design are always welcomed !

This post was edited by UncleMuscles on Mar 19 2013 01:37pm
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Mar 19 2013 03:19pm
i dont know why exactly but something makes me dislike this as a poster
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Mar 19 2013 03:51pm
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Mar 19 2013 03:19pm)
i dont know why exactly but something makes me dislike this as a poster


is it my face :(
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Mar 19 2013 05:27pm
what's the concept behind your gallery again?
might help with the design of poster

This post was edited by TheShattered on Mar 19 2013 05:27pm
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Mar 19 2013 05:41pm
drop all that shit

just put the date and location, down the bottom XD\

e/ email me the image I want to try something plx contact@danielwhyte.com

This post was edited by WhyteLinux on Mar 19 2013 05:43pm
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