So remember that logo I showed the other day? I'm trying to work it into a business card. Be honest - does it work like this?

It's a mock up, yes it's a little choppy. This is just the front. The more I look at this, the more I think "why the fuck did I post this and what the fuck was I thinking."

I've been staring at this logo for almost a week straight working on it - maybe I need a breather before doing the business cards.

EDIT: Here are the logos if anyone feels like helping me out/making suggestions.



This post was edited by Flood on Feb 26 2013 06:51pm

why wont just the logo work?

you tried printing it?
those lines XD

the 'circles' add nothing to the logo and don;t add anything that would aid in telling people about you, the distract from anything the logo might have told them and give the viewer a sense that you probably have ADD.

If you want to break up the grey you could go with a single 'wave' type vector over a side/corner that has the same curvature as your logo.