ew

looks rusty imo, especially hair
not bad for d2jsp quality but you've clearly done better

wow, oversharpened and you made her look fat

you cking suck
still oversharpened, i do not know what to do

This post was edited by McFacializer on Jan 13 2013 11:54pm

i suggest removing the jizz, bring in left cheek bone / jaw, work on the flow of hair, adjust the lighting around window to be more sensible (use reference if u can't imagine realistically)
also i'd work on her neck and shoulders a little moar, there's no reason for her neck to be making those kinds of shadows
otherwise nice texture colors and cool idea, will be nice to see this more refined

i love it but i see you tried to fix the hair and made it look worse

thanks! but i think i'm done with this one haha. the lighting is all fucked up because the background/scene was a last minute thing; i want to try and expand from just a simple portrait. i lost the reference, and i hadn't even finished the face when i decided to work on it more.



fuck hair, seriously

imo the first hair was the best

I love flat vectored hair with no gradient really, adds to a piece alot of the time having a solid flat color/shape

and imo keep the face splooge.

neck shadow is wrong, there should be the darkest in the middle of the neck , then reflected light on our left side.

other than that i love the colors

0/10

The first one had way more splooge.