I really don't like the object right behind him, on the right side of his head.
It matches the scarf, but I find it distracting. And then the pixels on the top portion of the render, could probably blend that in better.
Might look better without text.

pixels fixed, no black thing behind scarf

Textless

Not a fan of new shitty rap (No offence) so I'm biased on the subject, but all in all it looks really good. The background kind of has a watercolor feel to it, well done.

none taken, i simply liked the render, so i figured id try working with it