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Dec 23 2012 11:57am
lmk what you think open to advice and opinions ofc

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anyone?
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why is her hair see through
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Dec 25 2012 07:33pm
Yeah like Naga said you've got dark outlines on the majority of the piece but light ones on the hair. I'd do a deep red or brown to define the hair and it'd probably make a big difference. Nice though for sure. Shoulders may be a bit broad but it looks nice.
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Dec 26 2012 03:56am
now that you menchin it the shoulders are prity big hmm

im not used to the female body yet ill have to work

i need to think more slender looking

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Dec 26 2012 04:01am
Quote (serpin @ Dec 26 2012 02:56am)
now that you menchin it the shoulders are prity big hmm

im not used to the female body yet ill have to work

i need to think more slender looking

thanks


find a gf that says 'draw me like one of your french girls'

Quote (serpin @ Dec 26 2012 03:05am)
i ment in an artistic way lol

well is sex art? some would argue so mabey i do HAHAHHA


aye. but interesting piece. rework the anatomy next time and it'll look lots better!

This post was edited by Exx on Dec 26 2012 04:08am
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Quote (Exx @ Dec 26 2012 03:01am)
find a gf that says 'draw me like one of your french girls'


i ment in an artistic way lol

well is sex art? some would argue so mabey i do HAHAHHA
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