If the hand looks kinda funny it's because I had to improvise on some of the fingers because she was wearing a big ass ring.

I'm terribad at picking colors. If you guys have any tips on color composition i'd like to hear em.

Here's my attempt at filling it in.



Here it is again with the same colors as this guy: http://deftbeat.deviantart.com/gallery/30024845#/d1s06jv

actually pretty good
nice one

i like the first one a lot

I do as well! It's really not bad at all.

Shading on nose is odd, makes it look huge. Teeth look also bit weird, like she's missing some. Do something with that finger, it looks like sausage.

This, and I also think her wrist looks a little odd, like it bends in 2places between the arm and hand.
Other than that, it looks cool.