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Oct 30 2012 05:05am
First large piece in a very long time.
I'm overall very happy with it but I'd love to hear some opinions and maybe get some tips for the future.

Edit: I decided to actually just upload the other versions now in case people are curious.
Also I can edit anything on there if you would like to see:
Full red background: http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/9254/controlembraceconquerre.jpg
Full blue background: http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/9636/controlembraceconquerbl.jpg
Full white background: http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9153/controlembraceconquerwh.jpg
No clipping masks.
No Text.
Ect..


I think my text is prob something that needs the most work.
I really want text in this piece though I wasn't sure how to put it in. I hope it's okay the way it is.

Anyways.. no more blah blah blah.
Let me know :)



This post was edited by Avid on Oct 30 2012 05:25am
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Oct 30 2012 06:48am
pretty nice, the smudge could maybe use a little work, seems rushed :)
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Oct 30 2012 07:26am
Yea the smudge is a bit too "clumpy" I guess, idk just doesn't look smooth
and those lines on her face are a bit annoying, compared to the lines on the rest of her body, I would just get rid of the first 2
Overall though I like it, looks pretty neat
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Oct 30 2012 07:55am
Lines over her ruin it. I like the smudge and its clumsiness.

This post was edited by LindeRKV on Oct 30 2012 07:55am
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Oct 30 2012 09:36am
- horrible attempt of smudging
- no blending
- no flow
- awful random effects
- typo... n/c

read tutorials
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#6
Oct 30 2012 12:08pm
I agree the smudging could use some work.
Like my 3rd attempt :P
Though for some reason I like the way it turned out :/

I'll try getting rid of the two lines when I get home Skeletal. You might have a point.

I don't agree with "no flow"
Prob could be better but saying there is none just seems a little ridiculous to me.
Can anyone else comment on that?


Thanks for the comments guys.
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Oct 30 2012 12:27pm
Just because you added diagonal stripes and some smudge which roughly lead to the same directions doesn't mean you created flow.

Check out Odin's tutorial, it's well explained in there.
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Oct 30 2012 12:34pm
Quote (Sane @ Oct 30 2012 02:27pm)
Just because you added diagonal stripes and some smudge which roughly lead to the same directions doesn't mean you created flow.

Check out Odin's tutorial, it's well explained in there.


Will do :)
Going to work right now, I'll check everything when I get home.
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