Quote (GoD-Vin @ 9 Oct 2012 12:06)
Can you write smth more?
I dont understand sry - tell me your opinion also m8
Composition? What is this? Shades reflecting cardboard and bottle of jack on top of it with row of aces. It took me quite a bit of time to figure out what and where. There is no contrast, no focal, no nothing. Plain black and white undefined block of random items on top of each other.
While i don't know your preference on signatures, i think you should choose some object that should catch the sight. Values between colors and tones. Placement of objects. And that text is awful.