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Oct 1 2012 01:48am


just throw out your criticism
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Oct 1 2012 04:09am
Intro too long, needs maybe some music to add entertainment value
Don't make the fade out so long
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Oct 2 2012 12:28am



did what jsp said, tell me what u guys think, if i fixed it

This post was edited by Bruensboy on Oct 2 2012 12:29am
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Oct 2 2012 08:00am
Quote (Bruensboy @ Oct 1 2012 01:48am)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=voZPwdhaxg8

just throw out your criticism


that was good playing.
Quite a bit of hiding behind those crates or w/e, but definitely understandable since you were getting close to 24 kills
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