bro you got me yawning pretty good on this one

if its fail then donate

it's too much like your current... speaking of which, you should just remove the text altogether, it really brings the whole thing down.

followed sane's tut
didnt turn out as planned

If the pink(top half of sig) was a different color, this would look a ton better

Looks to similar to your current. Maybe try a different style of smudging?

if you reworked this with new colours it could be sick, wouldnt be too hard