So I'm making an image for my friend, I was also going to make it my background image when it's done. I wanted some feedback on my progress so far and I also had a few questions

• is the left background space-y enough? I feel like I need to add more
• I don't like how the backgrounds just sort of "meet" in the middle...any ways of blending it to look better? Or should I just cover it up with some sort of image?

any feedback is welcome, thanks

also ignore the white border, all of it will be removed

This post was edited by fighton25 on Jul 11 2012 03:27pm

Ok, holy clusterfuck.

needs to blend in more and take out the render of the guy with the crochet needles... bad render...

Possibly a vague comment was or is in or around this quote, maybe.

I'm not currently feeling it man. You have a lot of things going on and as Flora said above it's clustered. The renders aren't that good of quality, I don't understand the change of background in the middle of the image, there's many focal points...the list goes on. In the end though, if you're making this for your friend and for your background - what matters is whether or not you like it.



Lol

ok thanks for the feedback everyone. I knew people wouldn't sugar coat it which is why I posted here haha. any other tips?

Can you explain what it is you're trying to do?


I don't even know what to give tips on.

I'm not even sure myself. I mean my friend wanted these characters for a poster, I just wanted to make something eye catching, with a nice background.



Can you explain more? What do you not like about the render?

I think I will remove the woman in the middle, it makes the picture look much less cluttered.

ITS MISSING TITTIES!