Is it just me or do you guys think it needs a bit more blending?

that and lighting and more color perhaps

idk tho. render itself confuses me since her upper body is floating

Not feeling this one m8

Yeah I think more color would be nice, make the body stand out more also.

Head is to dark while clothing is so bright, steals focal.

the render got some jagged edges, and the way the fabric changes direction upward after her arm.. really bothers me.

I think it's a good concept, I like the colors.

But I agree with the other that it needs more blending, and the way it seems as though she is cut in half is...odd.

And one thing that really bugs me is the lightning. She has a moon / orb right infront of her face, yet her face is in shadow. If that orb were to be giving off light he face would be illuminated. You would need to either change the direction of the light being emitted from the orb, or make it smaller and move it into the background in my opinion.

Looks good otherwise though, I would refine it some and you will have yourself quote a terrific signature.

This post was edited by Flakbait on Jul 2 2012 02:54pm

thx for all the comments guys! And i agree what all of you have said, but i'm too lazy to start fixing the mistakes.. I can send the PSD if someone is interested.

and i made a new one, nothing really mindblowing or new, just a plain simple tag.

This tag has no balls.