Quote (FloraFreak @ Jun 24 2012 11:09pm)
Eyes need to be a little bit more sharp.
The dots need to be smaller.
and the way you painted on the stripes are for a straight forward face, she is at a 1/8th turn. which gives the whole face very odd looking proportions.
wow thats quite an eye
even looking directly at it i dont notice the turn difference
thank you 
i think im going too try another attempt on a different stock photo