Well, I followed a few guides and came up with this:



I'd like critiques on the text design and the art itself.

Also, if someone would like to use this in a sig just let me know, free of course.

Critics? Well, there is not much to say. Apparently this text looks awful, sorry for being harsh but it is. It doesn't fit there, not by placement and neither the look of it. Basically what it is is smudge on some soft-brushed and blurred background and bokeh on top of everything. Smudge doesn't fit either, it is randomly done plain white splash in the middle of the whole piece. I don't see anything good in here except the fact that you learned something new and can now do different tings to learn even more.

I don't see how my post could help you tho except that you know that it isn't anything that requires lots of skill or knowledge - just the basics of the tools in Photoshop. Practice more.

The fonts are a bit blurry , like the colors .

Looks LQ.
Text is terrible.
Conflicting flow.

never understood why people put no rip stuff on jsp


its like clearly nobody is going to rip you brah, if they wanted to rip, theres zillions of un-watermarked stuff thats amazing out there, so why are you going to make your piece look stupid for no reason?

I do really like the choice of colors on this one; they go together nicely.
The background and foreground are rather conflicting though. One is flowing one way while the other is going another. In addition, the quality does seem rather low - it almost looks grainy.

Good thing you water-marked it.

My only suggestion would be to bevel the text. It seems like it's missing something.

This post was edited by ericswanson_19 on Jun 13 2012 12:54pm

Thanks for the suggestion. It seems the biggest problem is the text, and also the white. I will work on this.

Thanks for all the critiques, especially the polite ones

"It stinks" - the critic

i remember you
you had the chick with that fake dick in her mouth yo