@Current.
haven't done this stuff in a while. inb4 "it shows". I took my precious time with this and I think it's ready for your expert opinions and slams.
nao take a poo on it plox

Text is fighting for the focal, its hard to not want to look at it more then the girl. and I'm not digging the soft white brush or the dodge in the right low corner.

other then that, its kinda plain. but ya, it shows a bit.