usually my ideas are good imo, but my execution lacks
so i would like some cnc, cuase i plan on continuing this as a wip
also i really tried hard on the colors so id love some feedback on that.


v2:


also made my current last night, cnc it too fi u want

This post was edited by Punkz on Jun 5 2012 11:20pm

did i miss a footnote that should warn me about you being high while you made these?
or were you sober

yes i was high...do i really need to tell everyone every time i get fucked up?
btw im really fucked up on opiates... so u know now u dont have to ask

This post was edited by Punkz on Jun 5 2012 11:22pm

i like the bottom lp but what does a bridge have to do with it ._.

are u going to post something actually worth reading? its a bridge dude, could have been a boat or a tree, but i chose a bridge

not trying to be an ass, but i would really like some cnc instead of random questions. especially on the colors

This post was edited by Punkz on Jun 5 2012 11:41pm

v2 looks much better with the textures or smudgings or whatever those are that yu applied
i feel like the colors could use some work tho,, not quite sexual for my eyes imo

sorry for the double post but i cant edit mine :/
but i feel like some shade of pink would better fit this piece rather then the blue?

just realized how egotistical that made me sound

I feel like this one lacks oomph, i cant quite put my finger on it but its just not really happening for me

i hate that thing. it looks like a shittier version of the crap you see on tumblr. it's sharpened too much, and the compo seems awkward(especially with the text). i think the colors are the worst part though; the yellow is murky, the blue is too dark, and the red around the canvas looks overcontrasted and terrible.

your current is fuckin cool though, i like that purple. the yellow shape seems out of place and makes the right side seem heavy. the soft brushing over the bitch is a bit strong and makes the right side seem 'undercontrasted' compared to the rest of the tag. i like how the left side is empty, but the different shapes like the green things and the bubbles are too random and dispersed. it could also use a sharpen.