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May 1 2012 02:15pm
Made these out of boredom and practicing my GFX all at same time.

CnC




1st:

I kinda fucked this one up because the guy is actually camouflaged too much with the background but the idea is there.



2nd:

My best result to be totally honest, I actually like this one.



3rd:

Same with the 2nd one but on different side and different color.
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May 1 2012 02:21pm
1.
a. The backgrounds flow is messed up, looks like you liquified it?
b. The colors are to monotone, it would look nice with some browns and other shades of green, not just ones taken from the render.
c. Has almost no foreground to it, adding something in the foreground would improve depth a great deal

2.

a. Text is horrible, just avoid text. Notice a lot of the really good tag artists don't use it. They do this for a reason.
b. Same thing as #1, the flow of the background is completely off.
c. To much empty space on the left, could be fixed by something in the foreground(has the same issue as #1 c)

3.
a. Same issues / common mistakes as the other two.
b. Try to avoid renders like that, they're very hard to use because they already have "depth" to them. It ruins composition and the end result of the signature.
c. Render also looks very low quality. Remember what you put in is what you get out. Try to use nothing but high quality images.
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May 1 2012 02:22pm
Quote (Ayudame @ May 1 2012 08:21pm)
1.
      a.  The backgrounds flow is messed up, looks like you liquified it?
      b. The colors are to monotone, it would look nice with some browns and other shades of green, not just ones taken from the render.
      c. Has almost no foreground to it, adding something in the foreground would improve depth a great deal

2.

      a. Text is horrible, just avoid text. Notice a lot of the really good tag artists don't use it. They do this for a reason.
      b. Same thing as #1, the flow of the background is completely off.
      c. To much empty space on the left, could be fixed by something in the foreground(has the same issue as #1 c)

3.
      a. Same issues / common mistakes as the other two.
      b. Try to avoid renders like that, they're very hard to use because they already have "depth" to them. It ruins composition and the end result of the signature.
      c. Render also looks very low quality. Remember what you put in is what you get out. Try to use nothing but high quality images.


Yeah, got these renders from www.planetrenders.net.

Thanks for your tips! Made these out of boredom anyway :)
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