Alright, so a friend of mine got his first web design client and is redesigning this beauty: www.brickersfries.com. Shocking that they would want to get rid of that, right? He has come up with his first homepage draft and would like to get some o dat cnc. He thinks it looks empty or appears to be missing something to make it stand out
http://i.imgur.com/W1uVL.jpg
Quality is shit cause imgur. Will get different host in a bit
Edit: i49.tinypic.com/o5q5qw.png

This post was edited by velias on Apr 29 2012 09:12pm

I'd Change the font, Or change the spacing between each letter as of right now, the text kinda meshes all together. I'd Also change the font of the links so its easier to read. As far as it missing well that is up too you. How much can you put about fries. I think the pattern at the footer needs adjusting, and what appears to be pickles at the top? Ill change that or smooth them out and make the shapes a bit more random. Easy way to make it more appealing is to add small details like penciled lines and such.

Solid cnc, thanks. Minor update. Removed the fringe paper bit above the navigation bar, increased spacing of navigation links, increased spacing on content headers and changed color as well, and changed textures on navigation bar/footer. I think readability has increased a bit?
i50.tinypic.com/mhddvk.png
iso more input

This post was edited by velias on Apr 30 2012 12:06am