colors are dull, m creates a 2nd focal. way too chaotic

meh

Black border isn't big enuff.

i tried to hide stuff behind the border + the M
:C

when ur tagging, ask yourself what is the main thing people are going to go "WOW" at in this tag.

Usually its one effect or a texture or lighting or something that really pops and makes them want to refer to it by that effect.

In this i get an M, and a bunch of dull colors and messy effects.

Always keep color, don't wash it out.

Always try and keep things clean unless the messy looks like it was intended.

boring. No action, Dull colours. M is striking me as the main focal point. no depth.

thanks =)