Quote (UncleMuscles @ Feb 15 2012 11:17am)
ahhhh chunky/ to much flesh
on this one im really trying to push into realism more and more.... so any cnc really helps
Ok.
I'm going to type in only her perspective.
The right eye has nice style, but the left is more realistic. try copying it and reversing the image to place over your right eye and set to low opacity for reference.
The earring is attached to what? looks like its hair piece atm.
The shadowing in the eyes looks a bit strong for the lighting, there is going to be some ambiant light from her cheeks.
eye brows are all out of whack, unless this is the look shes giving. if so there needs to be some muscle work for the skin to move the brows.
The bridge of her nose is looking a little long, in relation to her face. but its so subtle I don't notice unless I'm really looking at it.
The bridge is also looking a bit square, it feels like a struggle with the 1/8 angle of the face. The tip of the nose also feels this way.
The left side of her mouse which was once too short, now seems to extend just a smidgen to far. Where the color ends is where I see the opening ending. hold your finger over the edge and see if you see it also.
Thats all I have, Looks great. Can't wait to see it finished.
This post was edited by FloraFreak on Feb 15 2012 09:37am