I dont like the composition and effects, seem really random
and please dont use blur/smudge to create depth, try using shading instead and sharpen
and dont abuse filters

Don't know. Sometimes it can be used in a very good way - as you create depth with it as long with other aspects, it looks more natural. By nature, your eye focuses the same way on close objects, nothing wrong with it.

Point is to not rely your depth on it, highlights-shadows is just as important and gives a sense of dimensions.

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I understand that many people have something against this thread but why post? This is nonsense. It not like your posts are going to change anything or make the world better place. This is why thread with least point get closed why completely pointless ones stay open. Let people progress.

I decided to go back and re-evaluate what I did with this sig. Retouched it and I think it's a lot better! Let me know what you think..

Old version:



Looks like the lighting on the old version is better, Working away at it.

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This post was edited by Lwe12345 on Oct 29 2012 12:32pm

seems like too much contrast some parts are really dark some parts too bright
some parts of it are really sharp, like bottom left and then those light spheres on top right (yellow) are like.... uh...
idk, LQ?
idk lol, so bad at this

I liked 1st one better. Better depth. As i mentioned it, eye by nature focuses on what you look at and blurs out rest.

Np. Thanks for the advice

super jealous of your smudge skills by the way.