Quote (TzL @ Sep 16 2011 12:22pm)
Sharpen face more, blurr her ass.
Right now the focal is drawn to the bottom left corner, which is a fail.
Thats always the focal brah.
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Sep 17 2011 06:43pm)
there is two big problems
as tzl said you prolly shoulda used a different render here. the lighting looks strange with a cartoon
and the effects are way more chaotic and lower quality than the tut
both are pretty lq though (render/bg), and yeah its def too chaotic.
choose a different render, don't do so much in the bg, and work on the lighting.
Quote (hostamp @ Sep 16 2011 01:34pm)
That's why i said light was a fail, because if i want to draw attention back to the focal point :
http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/2688/larau.jpg
(You can replace the light orb by what you want, it's just an example)
The render's light come from the top left... I think you see the point here
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And repaint light / shadow of the render is not an option since i really s*** at painting.
Still good though, best attempt I've seen in this thread.
and I agree on the comment from earlier, blur the ass some, sharpen the face a tad.
I like the depth in the middle area, under her.
But I think it would add more depth if you removed that c4d at the left, and did with that space what you did in the middle.
This post was edited by Mongrel on Sep 18 2011 12:54am