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Oct 27 2012 05:36pm
Quote (sicklad @ Oct 27 2012 07:05pm)
tl;dr you're a bitch.



Just so YOU realize, you've literally only logged on to give me shit.
Your life has been consumed with trying to one up me and it's pitiful.
I sent you some fg because you're so insecure
I'll refrain from painfully picking you apart because I like using this forum


This post was edited by Lwe12345 on Oct 27 2012 05:51pm
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Oct 27 2012 05:58pm
less talk, more sigs
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Oct 27 2012 06:07pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Oct 28 2012 10:36am)
Just so YOU realize, you've literally only logged on to give me shit.
Your life has been consumed with trying to one up me and it's pitiful.
I sent you some fg because you're so insecure
I'll refrain from painfully picking you apart because I like using this forum


>logged on

Lolno, I autologin like a pro.

How am I trying to one-up you?
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Oct 27 2012 07:06pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Oct 27 2012 07:58pm)
less talk, more sigs


working on one atm
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Oct 28 2012 10:15pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Oct 27 2012 07:58pm)
less talk, more sigs





something about it is irking me, but maybe I'm just crazy.
As always ignore typo, just watermarking it
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Oct 28 2012 10:20pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Oct 28 2012 10:15pm)
http://i.imgur.com/qqHGB.jpg


something about it is irking me, but maybe I'm just crazy.
As always ignore typo, just watermarking it


NN for watermark m8,


post w/o typo , its too distracting
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Oct 28 2012 10:22pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Oct 28 2012 10:15pm)
http://i.imgur.com/qqHGB.jpg


something about it is irking me, but maybe I'm just crazy.
As always ignore typo, just watermarking it


I think it is the abrupt color change from the darker redish color to the bright orange coming from around the gun... it is too sudden and doesn't have enough blending

This post was edited by Funion on Oct 28 2012 10:22pm
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Oct 28 2012 10:26pm



Quote (Funion @ Oct 29 2012 12:22am)
I think it is the abrupt color change from the darker redish color to the bright orange coming from around the gun... it is too sudden and doesn't have enough blending



Agreed
I will rework this part of it tomorrow

This post was edited by Lwe12345 on Oct 28 2012 10:29pm
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Oct 28 2012 11:06pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ Oct 28 2012 10:26pm)
http://i.imgur.com/WePjR.jpg





Agreed
I will rework this part of it tomorrow


I say pitch it aside and start new

this render is a pretty bad render imo :S its been used a million times and idk its just not that good , especially for beginners


get a render with a more dynamic pose
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Oct 28 2012 11:19pm
Quote (TerrapinStation @ Oct 27 2012 12:20pm)
this thread is funny


I couldn't agree more :)
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