any crits on mine TRM? i'd like to improve in my brushing, surprisingly I like this a lot compared to the other methods of tagging, not really sure why it's tedious, and a pain in the ass




or from you?

anyone?




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This post was edited by Epiphany on Oct 4 2011 07:53pm

hmm.

Most good signatures are tedious and difficult.
Yours you skipped the sharpen step.
Smudging is decent, but still needs alot of work, keep practicing.
Elbows are a bad place to smudge the stock, as they would be the closest thing in the foreground. Screws up the depth quite a bit. I would blend in portions of her torso (T-Shirt?) possibly.
The colors are very bland, like I said before.. try using similar or ( analogous ) colors.
The smudging is leading in every possible direction away from the stock, there is no flow here. Its okay to branch off from the direct flow here and there.. but first you need flow.
You seem to understand a little bit of the tutorial, but you completely negated the design basics.
Scrap and try again would be my advice.

This post was edited by DB_odin on Oct 4 2011 07:57pm

expected more boobs
greg fails to follow through

tyvm, i think i'll try some edits since almost everything is it's own layer so it shouldn't be extremely hard to work with what you gave me, tyvm
i didn't skip the sharpen step btw, if i sharpen it again it looks really overshapened, even with just sections sharpened, but ill play with it !


e/

now that I look at it more i'll still have to rearrage all of the flow of the brushing so i guess i will scrap and restart


mine has plenty, what are you talking about?

This post was edited by Epiphany on Oct 4 2011 08:08pm

db odin dodges with boobs

tried this tut

The effects look nifty, render looks over-contrasted though

followed n-95's tut