Quote (hostamp @ Sep 16 2011 06:34pm)
That's why i said light was a fail, because if i want to draw attention back to the focal point :
http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/2688/larau.jpg
(You can replace the light orb by what you want, it's just an example)
The render's light come from the top left... I think you see the point here
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And repaint light / shadow of the render is not an option since i really s*** at painting.
this one had great concept, but follow-through is lacking, pay more attention to the smaller details.The colors are kinda weak. Work on lighting and sharpening
Quote (antal14domina @ Sep 16 2011 09:28pm)
Thanks everyone for the comments :love:, did some minor fixes to try to improve text :3
http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb444/Antal14/a14d-1.png
I agree with nero, way to much contrast.
hit it with a light-medium purple layer on lighten 40ish % or so is my recommendation.
The improvements from week1 are night and day.
This post was edited by DB_odin on Sep 16 2011 07:41pm