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Oct 26 2012 08:23pm
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Quote (sicklad @ Oct 26 2012 10:03pm)
Which he really didn't do..

Still got terrible composition and bad colours.


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also

I did

I've been specifically concentrating on http://senthrax.deviantart.com/art/Full-Signature-Tutorial-55042010
and for the pantheon one I experimented for the first time with http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs27/f/2008/185/c/f/Typography_Tutorial_by_Xpnze.jpg
Using it a couple of times to learn all I can and see what different outcomes I can get from it

Contrary to what your larger than life ego thinks, I am :
using only colors that are a part of the complimentary sections of the wheel
using C4ds that compliment the flow of the signature, using circles for rule of thirds when I don't feel like staring at the grid lines
drawing in the flow with a brush as a guideline
utilizing topaz and sharpening to keep renders and the sigs I've done NOT blurry



so get the fuck out of here already, I'm completely done with you. You're wasting space and time. The minuscule amount of effort required of me to give two less fucks every time you post is getting old, so just leave and get your hard on being a massive piece of trash on another thread

:banana:

This post was edited by Lwe12345 on Oct 26 2012 08:26pm
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Quote (Lwe12345 @ Oct 27 2012 01:23pm)
The post has been reported. Thank you for your help in keeping this site a cleaner and better place for everyone!


also

I did

I've been specifically concentrating on http://senthrax.deviantart.com/art/Full-Signature-Tutorial-55042010
and for the pantheon one I experimented for the first time with http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs27/f/2008/185/c/f/Typography_Tutorial_by_Xpnze.jpg
Using it a couple of times to learn all I can and see what different outcomes I can get from it

Contrary to what your larger than life ego thinks, I am :
using only colors that are a part of the complimentary sections of the wheel
using C4ds that compliment the flow of the signature, using circles for rule of thirds when I don't feel like staring at the grid lines
drawing in the flow with a brush as a guideline
utilizing topaz and sharpening to keep renders and the sigs I've done NOT blurry



so get the fuck out of here already, I'm completely done with you. You're wasting space and time. The minuscule amount of effort required of me to give two less fucks every time you post is getting old, so just leave and get your hard on being a massive piece of trash on another thread

:banana:


Chill out. We were all terrible at one point. Looking back at stuff when I first started out makes me fucking laugh.
But you're not going to improve much if people keep saying "OMG SO GOOD MANG9 PLZ POAST MOAR!"

Also not cool raging at someone who's just trying to help, I even linked you to those tutorials.


Quote (Lwe12345 @ Oct 27 2012 02:12pm)
http://i.imgur.com/YmITY.jpg


Weak flow.
Central focal.
Overall not a very good stock because of the hands and how much larger they are than the rest of it.
Stay away from text for now.


Also reporting criticism will do nothing, are you fucking 10? Learn to take a hit.
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Quote (Lwe12345 @ Oct 26 2012 11:12pm)
http://i.imgur.com/YmITY.jpg


this is the only canvas of pixels that is at all decent in this topic, normally i'd explain why but


you are fucking stupid

This post was edited by TheReborn_Magi on Oct 27 2012 12:46am
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Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Oct 27 2012 02:46am)
this is the only canvas of pixels that is at all decent in this topic, normally i'd explain why but


you are fucking stupid


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Quote (sicklad @ Oct 27 2012 02:19am)
Chill out. We were all terrible at one point. Looking back at stuff when I first started out makes me fucking laugh.
But you're not going to improve much if people keep saying "OMG SO GOOD MANG9 PLZ POAST MOAR!"

Also not cool raging at someone who's just trying to help, I even linked you to those tutorials.




Weak flow.
Central focal.
Overall not a very good stock because of the hands and how much larger they are than the rest of it.
Stay away from text for now.


Also reporting criticism will do nothing, are you fucking 10? Learn to take a hit.


Your most recent post was flat out condescending. Why say anything if you're not addressing me personally? Judging me against what you believe vs. what you know are two different things, and you seem to only do the former.
If you have a criticism, avoid the passive aggression and tell ME if you think I haven't been following tutorials.
If it had been your first post, where the words "constructive" and "terrible" were somehow complimentary to each other I would have cared a lot less, but the indirect crap was just rude.

I've plenty of experience taking much more negative and harsh criticism than what you've got to type on a thread I've started on d2jsp.com
The difference is that can and have taken harsh criticism and reflect upon it when I get it from people I respect, people that know me and my potential, and are undeniably trying to bring out the best in me.
Here, from the safety and comfort of your own home you can stumble upon a random thread with a brand new artist and say whatever the fuck you want. In your case, towards the end it wound up coming across pretty condescending and rude.
I've taught for 5 years, I know how to get results and what it means to teach something to someone, constantly using my intuition to figure out how whoever it is learns best.
What most of you have said has rang true, I think the results speak for themselves, but at this point because of your preconceived notions about me due to my first post (Where I reacted not so well to the first set of semi-rude criticisms) it doesn't matter what I do because you've stopped teaching and started just waiting for opportunities to say something I've done wrong (Which you can subjectively find with anything that has ever been done artistically).

Once again, there's a difference between constructive criticism and what's going on here for some of you.

This post was edited by Lwe12345 on Oct 27 2012 10:20am
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this thread is funny
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Oct 27 2012 02:49pm
Quote (Lwe12345 @ 27 Oct 2012 06:12)


Great choice of render - it got good lighting on it and hint of depth already. Though, i see it as you have render on top of render with minor contrast/color and sharpening-blurring tweaks.
But the render really covers up most of mistakes, i even quite like it.

Stop with the hating though, it is getting annoying. Don't get hurt because of mean or harsh comments because if you do, you will be put down and out of this section. Not that i particularly think it is right way to act but this is how it is and neither of us can change it.
Learn, produce, quit or proceed - that's how it works.

This post was edited by LindeRKV on Oct 27 2012 02:54pm
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Quote (LindeRKV @ Oct 27 2012 04:49pm)
Great choice of render - it got good lighting on it and hint of depth already. Though, i see it as you have render on top of render with minor contrast/color and sharpening-blurring tweaks.
But the render really covers up most of mistakes, i even quite like it.

Stop with the hating though, it is getting annoying. Don't get hurt because of mean or harsh comments because if you do, you will be put down and out of this section. Not that i particularly think it is right way to act but this is how it is and neither of us can change it.
Learn, produce, quit or proceed - that's how it works.


the most down to earth response I could have asked for.

Thanks

This post was edited by Lwe12345 on Oct 27 2012 03:00pm
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Quote (Lwe12345 @ Oct 28 2012 03:18am)
Your most recent post was flat out condescending. Why say anything if you're not addressing me personally? Judging me against what you believe vs. what you know are two different things, and you seem to only do the former.
If you have a criticism, avoid the passive aggression and tell ME if you think I haven't been following tutorials.
If it had been your first post, where the words "constructive" and "terrible" were somehow complimentary to each other I would have cared a lot less, but the indirect crap was just rude.

I've plenty of experience taking much more negative and harsh criticism than what you've got to type on a thread I've started on d2jsp.com
The difference is that can and have taken harsh criticism and reflect upon it when I get it from people I respect, people that know me and my potential, and are undeniably trying to bring out the best in me.
Here, from the safety and comfort of your own home you can stumble upon a random thread with a brand new artist and say whatever the fuck you want. In your case, towards the end it wound up coming across pretty condescending and rude.
I've taught for 5 years, I know how to get results and what it means to teach something to someone, constantly using my intuition to figure out how whoever it is learns best.
What most of you have said has rang true, I think the results speak for themselves, but at this point because of your preconceived notions about me due to my first post (Where I reacted not so well to the first set of semi-rude criticisms) it doesn't matter what I do because  you've stopped teaching and started just waiting for opportunities to say something I've done wrong (Which you can subjectively find with anything that has ever been done artistically).

Once again, there's a difference between constructive criticism and what's going on here for some of you.


tl;dr you're a bitch.
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