excellent

This was the psd I used for my current one.
I did a few things different though.


This post was edited by sicklad on Sep 16 2011 05:31am

the point of this is to learn
you can't achieve MAXIMUM LEARNING by using your own psd.

he didnt make that psd he shows in his post o _o

PSD used :


Attempt:


I know i f***** up with lightning (at least), so i could need some help with that :/ .

++composition, the concept is just great
+render to canvas size is good and the focal is pretty clear
as you said the lighting is different. yours is more smooth which isnt bad, i personally like the high contrast lighting though like in the psd
-not a big negative but the sparkles shes reaching for seem a bit bland, I'd expect her to be about to grab something else i dunno, just seems strange to me

overall one of the best sigs ive seen around here in awhile tbh

Sharpen face more, blurr her ass.
Right now the focal is drawn to the bottom left corner, which is a fail.

Finally treyed a vector tool tag
Original:


Attempt:

prolly the best ive seen from you
theres some flaws (like the ending beam)
the typo isnt that good though, much better fonts than the one youve used

what´s so fascinating with tags..........