Fuck,
most of these r hella sex

pochy does have a tut on smudging actually but i can tell you doing that stuff isnt something you learn in a few hours but im gonna discuss this all with you in the future

This post was edited by TheReborn_Magi on Sep 1 2011 06:20am

This was my outcome

first thing i noticed is the white still hanging onto the edges of the render, you need to clean it up for sure
his hat is also weird looking at the top there, id say just cut it out
im iffy on the effect on the right and while i like the typography a little but, i dont like the placement

otherwise good stuff

This post was edited by TheReborn_Magi on Sep 1 2011 10:47am

Okay thanks

I just found this thread, I love it already
Will definitely post in an attempt before sunday.

I somehow ended up with this

its got some interesting colors and the render is cool, i can see where you were going with this, but its very empty.
the render takes up only about 1/4 of the sig and the bg is pretty empty as well, perhaps some c4d's or something could help resolve it though im not sure

If it's any consolation on the back space area, I would have put the name there under her left armpit (right near / in / around that yellowish area). I would make it a decent size as well.

unless you have some crazy good idea for some typo, that wouldnt work well