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#681
Nov 3 2015 12:53pm
Your proportions haven't improved by a dime since I don't know when, sorry.

Technique is good, on some pieces, but these drawings look really odd with the out-of-the-world body parts.
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Nov 11 2015 04:05am
Quote (LindeRKV @ Nov 3 2015 11:53am)
Your proportions haven't improved by a dime since I don't know when, sorry.

Technique is good, on some pieces, but these drawings look really odd with the out-of-the-world body parts.


well, ill draw more till i see no improving at all. hopefully my idea will come out faster. this sketch took me like a week.. shittt. thank for look up on my drawing.
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Nov 11 2015 04:12am


Ne Zha sketch.
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Nov 11 2015 04:27am
Quote (cu_luu1 @ 11 Nov 2015 12:05)
well, ill draw more till i see no improving at all. hopefully my idea will come out faster. this sketch took me like a week.. shittt. thank for look up on my drawing.


What I mean is try to focus more on proportions and less on diamond-finish. You have so many drawings with huge amounts of small details and stuff and that draws your attention from proportions. Do more simple sketches of stuff - people, animals, whatever - in different forms, angles etc.
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Nov 11 2015 06:43pm
Quote (LindeRKV @ Nov 11 2015 03:27am)
What I mean is try to focus more on proportions and less on diamond-finish. You have so many drawings with huge amounts of small details and stuff and that draws your attention from proportions. Do more simple sketches of stuff - people, animals, whatever - in different forms, angles etc.


ok i will focus more on next piece
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Nov 19 2015 01:33am

Erlang Shen sketch
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#687
Nov 19 2015 10:01am
>i will focus more
>doesn't
cu_luu.jpg
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Nov 19 2015 01:33pm
Quote (Toddler @ Nov 19 2015 09:01am)
>i will focus more
>doesn't
cu_luu.jpg


What is focus>????
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#689
Nov 20 2015 01:54pm
Quote (cu_luu1 @ 19 Nov 2015 21:33)
What is focus>????


Look at that face of a dog on your last piece. This is what focus isn't.
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Nov 21 2015 02:18pm
Quote (LindeRKV @ Nov 20 2015 12:54pm)
Look at that face of a dog on your last piece. This is what focus isn't.


what is ur problem look at dog's face????
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