srry.. com'??? srry spam off ur painting..all i wanna say is gl on u and ur art works..

This post was edited by cu_luu1 on Sep 21 2011 11:32pm

i dont understand your previous post

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dat dere bene texture

the face looks good just the neck/chest is too ambiguous IMO maybe define the clavicles a little more?

awesome progress on landscapes, not so much at portraits! Keep it up Go with bigger brushes and longer strokes!

I personally see the last portrait as a great improvement, it's more defined, clear and realistic than previous ones. Landscapes are decent but i see it as a stop - many of previous ones look good but i don't think it is getting better for now. Not that i think those are bad, no. They look good, just not much improvement in these.

I might be bold, but i see greater progress at landscapes!

I do agree he is improving, even at portraits but its similar to the painting that was made quite some time ago. Zombie self portrait has same weaknesses as this one. He could progress even faster with studies!

which part of the piece do i need to work on more? what studies?

the shirt/cloth piece i did in like 1 min lul got lazy at the end...

btw i love hearing this feedback, ty ty ty ty ty

This post was edited by UncleMuscles on Sep 22 2011 07:00am

lower body add neck

Well, yes if you take it that way. From the beginning, improvement is overwhelming but i wouldn't compare those oldest works with new ones, those are completely different level pieces. Rather i would take latest works for comparison to see slight progress. I think landscapes haven't gone so much better from few last ones, on other hand i see much more in portraits. Might be just me thou, haven't been around often and also got quite far from doing anything related.