Does it really? Fuck, back to beginner tuts then LOL.

Maybe but you can see bits of thoughful composition at beginner level. It has flow and 3rds applied, just details around focal are too sharp and distracting.

Had a little fun doing this one. Couldn't tell whether the filter on the right side ruined it decided to post up a second one.





This post was edited by LostInMyMind on Jan 3 2013 06:40pm

i like v1 better, its an improvement
typo should be removed from this piece, or better placed, composed
try to avoid huge white light sources taking up 1/4 of the sig
but deff improvement
keep calm, and tag on

Thank you! Yeah, i'll probably put typo on my tags just to get a little practice and experimentation in. Will also keep light sources smaller and i actually soft brushed too much white as well now that i see it.

Feel like i chose a bad render cause it was already pretty blue to begin with, but aside from that, i really like it.

i like lots, tho the green and turquoise doent really fit in
may also want to add some orange/yellow hints of light on render

Yeah i can see that, but i went a little trigger happy on c4d's lol. Oh man, that's something that didn't cross my mind, will definitely add bits of color variety around my render next time around.