Quote (Reload @ Mar 4 2012 11:54pm)
Finished product of the above tag.
http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/2171/smudgecrackssig.png
Cnc:
- The only colors you've added are dull and done via softbrushing - no!
- Huge white supernova behind the render - no!
- shadowing at every border of the tag? come on you can't be serious.
- oversharpened
- looks like a grunge tag
Told you, practice this kind of smudging before using it in tags. Currently you're far away from the tutorial outcome.
Quote (Avicii @ Mar 5 2012 12:15am)
I'm bad :/ Smudging is definitely not my best quality.. None of the C4D's I have really go well to smudge then use for detailing. And cant seem to find any really good ones.. If anyone has a few good ones feel free to send them my way. Or any other Resources for that matter.
http://i42.tinypic.com/k18cok.jpg
If you need c4ds, download c4d packs @ deviantart.
As for cnc:
- monotone
- light source is too strong
- render needs blending and is oversaturated
- way too many particles and bubble c4ds
- the flow isn't perfect, but a lot better than in your first tag.
Just keep trying.