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Sep 14 2011 08:21pm
FUCCCKKKKKK. This shit is so fustrating, im going nowhere with this -_-..

Try1
Try2

This post was edited by AF_Mitch_07 on Sep 14 2011 08:21pm
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Sep 14 2011 08:27pm
Quote (AF_Mitch_07 @ Sep 14 2011 10:21pm)
FUCCCKKKKKK. This shit is so fustrating, im going nowhere with this -_-..
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa185/AF_Mitch_07/xptag1crop.png
Try1http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa185/AF_Mitch_07/nportman-1.png
Try2http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa185/AF_Mitch_07/fuckthis.png

improvement over try1 but still a ways to go
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Sep 14 2011 11:45pm
Quote (AF_Mitch_07 @ Sep 14 2011 07:21pm)
FUCCCKKKKKK. This shit is so fustrating, im going nowhere with this -_-..
http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa185/AF_Mitch_07/xptag1crop.png
Try1http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa185/AF_Mitch_07/nportman-1.png
Try2http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/aa185/AF_Mitch_07/fuckthis.png


try 2 is wayyy better.. the colors are cool in the second one unlike the first one where its ugly and overcontrasted. the compo is still needs a lot of work though
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Sep 15 2011 01:41pm
i hope people are just busy and not dodging this assignment because it is hard or something, we will help you!
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Sep 15 2011 03:05pm
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ 15 Sep 2011 21:41)
i hope people are just busy and not dodging this assignment because it is hard or something, we will help you!


Yea, I don't have access to ps this days :cry:
I hope tomorrow or this weekend to be able to work <3
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Sep 15 2011 06:15pm
Magi you do one. i wanna see a pro do it :D
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Sep 15 2011 06:51pm
Quote (AF_Mitch_07 @ Sep 15 2011 08:15pm)
Magi you do one. i wanna see a pro do it :D


ill do a new one soon i guess, but ive been doing this for like a year lol, ill show you an example i did from just looking at a result 1 sec
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Sep 15 2011 07:12pm
nn dodge. Twas busy irl most of the week, but finally caught a break tonight so... I attacked this for like 3 hours till my brain sizzled on a psd from that resource pack you posted...I picked one I couldn't even understand 6 layers of and then tried my damnedest to figure it out. Totally epic class you are hosting, I have learned immeasurable amounts since following. Here is a copy of the psd I studied and my outcome. I can email you a copy of my result psd if you would like to look at it. Thanks!


Study:



Result:



post script: please also note my first real attempt at filling a slightly larger canvas...wow, more challenging than I thought!
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Sep 15 2011 07:33pm
Tried again cause this ones hard. I liked this outcome better than previous tries.
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v2 (red/green gmap)
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Sep 15 2011 10:21pm
@ Mitch, yours is close as far as compo.. the lighting is off. Light sources should not cover shadows on the stock
also try working with more colorful lighting

@ funk, way to grainy... making it very chaotic. I feel like you could have done more with the stock
not to impressed at the psd either.

@ Magi, got some neat stuffs for week4, ill pm later

This post was edited by DB_odin on Sep 15 2011 10:22pm
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