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May 14 2014 12:09pm
Quote (Nereaux @ May 14 2014 12:58pm)
background is texture overload, chaotic, there are some ugly colors in there, and then it looks like the render is kinda pasted on at the end.

in other words, newp :\


I wanted someone else to say it first, definitely this
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May 14 2014 01:56pm
Quote (Nereaux @ May 14 2014 12:58pm)
background is texture overload, chaotic, there are some ugly colors in there, and then it looks like the render is kinda pasted on at the end.

in other words, newp :\


I definitely didn't blend it enough... I see what you mean by ugly colors, but chaotic again?!

<_<
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May 14 2014 02:34pm
Quote (Resistance @ May 14 2014 11:56am)
I definitely didn't blend it enough... I see what you mean by ugly colors, but chaotic again?!

<_<


washed out gray, pink, brown, purple, orange, some blueish stuff, then that weird poop green >>right next to the focal<<
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May 21 2014 06:34am
Quote (Resistance @ May 14 2014 01:56pm)
I definitely didn't blend it enough... I see what you mean by ugly colors, but chaotic again?!

<_<


cover the render and look at the BG then look at BGs of other tags on forums ( good tags ) tell me you see the difference in your background and theres you have a lot of effects in your BG and you don't need that many if you have to erase some effects do so and postion them to go with the render shape of your tag


the chaotic ppl say is meant towards the BG on newest im sure you can see it chaotic means no flow to much going on after you look at that look at your other tags and look at the effects in the bg and foreground you see how you gone overboard and just plastered the tag with them and most don't have a flow to them they go in all directions work on that start with a few effects 1,2,3 make them smaller if you have to and position them to go with the shape of render look at the arms hips if the render is leaning you get it

This post was edited by aotisin on May 21 2014 06:37am
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May 21 2014 01:06pm
Loving the non trolling critique given here


Not only is it helping resistance but other artists browsing through this including things I didnt know myself.


Non troll CnC ftw
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