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Jun 24 2013 05:18pm
Is bottom left the focal?
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Jun 24 2013 05:23pm
She seems to just be floating with no legs I didn't understand the picture at all for quite a bit.
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Jun 24 2013 05:31pm
Hmm, I don't see it that way I guess. What could I have done to emphasis on the fact that she is the tree, or that the tree trunk is her.
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Jun 24 2013 06:47pm
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Hmm, I don't see it that way I guess. What could I have done to emphasis on the fact that she is the tree, or that the tree trunk is her.


you put that bark texture on such a small part her skin, but it doesn't seem to match the trunk. maybe put it on more of the skin, and make sure to use a similar texture/color.
new branches can be a different color than the trunk, but when a tree is still that young (about the size of a person), most of the tree is relatively the same.

the trunk itself doesn't look like it's meant to be in that particular forest, but it does match the position of her body.
all the other trunks of the trees in that forest are perfectly smooth and straight, whereas the trunk/legs of the girl has a more unique shape.

the flower on her arm throws me off, but the flowers by her neck seem nice. however, it isn't too common for a flower to grow on the side of a tree (not saying it's impossible). the crevice at her neck could have possibly accumulated dirt, and a seed could have gotten there. it's less likely to happen by the elbow though.
also, where did these flowers come from? i don't see any other flowers in the area. the flowers by her neck and the flower on her arm are different species too, which makes it seem even less likely to happen.

the dress is white, and a lot of white dresses are slightly transparent. making the bottom left part of the dress slightly (and i really do mean only slightly) transparent might help.
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Jun 24 2013 09:41pm
Quote (Hobo @ Jun 24 2013 07:47pm)
you put that bark texture on such a small part her skin, but it doesn't seem to match the trunk. maybe put it on more of the skin, and make sure to use a similar texture/color.
new branches can be a different color than the trunk, but when a tree is still that young (about the size of a person), most of the tree is relatively the same.

the trunk itself doesn't look like it's meant to be in that particular forest, but it does match the position of her body.
all the other trunks of the trees in that forest are perfectly smooth and straight, whereas the trunk/legs of the girl has a more unique shape.

the flower on her arm throws me off, but the flowers by her neck seem nice. however, it isn't too common for a flower to grow on the side of a tree (not saying it's impossible). the crevice at her neck could have possibly accumulated dirt, and a seed could have gotten there. it's less likely to happen by the elbow though.
also, where did these flowers come from? i don't see any other flowers in the area. the flowers by her neck and the flower on her arm are different species too, which makes it seem even less likely to happen.

the dress is white, and a lot of white dresses are slightly transparent. making the bottom left part of the dress slightly (and i really do mean only slightly) transparent might help.


Lots of good advice here, thanks for the feedback. And her arm is bark with moss on it, it just ended up looking like crap getting it on that small of an area unfortunatly.
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Jun 25 2013 12:54am
Quote (Zomb @ Jun 24 2013 10:41pm)
Lots of good advice here, thanks for the feedback. And her arm is bark with moss on it, it just ended up looking like crap getting it on that small of an area unfortunatly.


I'd also add some small branches possibly growing through her dress to give it more character.
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Jun 25 2013 01:49am
I FUCKING KNEW IT! DINOSAURS ARE AMONG US IN DISGUISE! HAHAHAHAHA YOU DUN GOOF'D THIS TIME, DINOSAUR!!!

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Jun 25 2013 02:38am
Lmfao, nice catch.

On a side note, I didn't actually notice how well the tree trunk itself flowed with her legs until I was done.
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Jun 25 2013 05:29am
Quote (sicklad @ Jun 25 2013 02:49am)
I FUCKING KNEW IT! DINOSAURS ARE AMONG US IN DISGUISE! HAHAHAHAHA YOU DUN GOOF'D THIS TIME, DINOSAUR!!!

http://i.imgur.com/8fmxpxJ.jpg


I'd excavate her any day.
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Jun 25 2013 05:40am
Quote (sicklad @ Jun 25 2013 03:49am)
I FUCKING KNEW IT! DINOSAURS ARE AMONG US IN DISGUISE! HAHAHAHAHA YOU DUN GOOF'D THIS TIME, DINOSAUR!!!

http://i.imgur.com/8fmxpxJ.jpg


Burn this bitch!
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