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Sep 14 2011 11:51am
Quote (Ctrlaltkick @ Sep 14 2011 01:44pm)
This is week #2s because i couldnt get to the tut for #3 :(

http://i.imgur.com/99YFK.jpg


if it was for week 2 you shoulda posted in week 2, thats why i have the earlier weeks at the top
as for this week it is learning from psds
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Sep 14 2011 01:30pm
im impressed with the people following through with this.
Keep up guys!
Ill be sure to uplaod a couple of my psd's
I wanna see that saltwater psd magi

also sorry i intended to help out more, hadda drive 400 miles for my dads 60th bday

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Sep 14 2011 01:57pm
Quote (DB_odin @ Sep 14 2011 07:30pm)
im impressed with the people following through with this.
Keep up guys!
Ill be sure to uplaod a couple of my psd's
I wanna see that saltwater psd magi

also sorry i intended to help out more, hadda drive 400 miles for my dads 60th bday

http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=48822549&f=105
PSDs for left side third down and right side fifth down would be amazing to see how you did these tags. I've always wondered about these two among your current.

This post was edited by Vigar on Sep 14 2011 01:57pm
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Sep 14 2011 02:13pm
i dont have unclemuscles start, but here is the finished mr odin
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=MSLAC3S6
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Sep 14 2011 02:58pm
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Sep 13 2011 11:44pm)
-the first thing i noticed is the differences in color, the tut has better colors, black and purple doesn't look nearly as nice to me
-the gmap you used just sits on top and doesn't change the blacks like the tut colors do, i dont know what exactly sort of blending/filter they did to get that but you didnt do that
--also, yours is super bright in a bad way, where as the tut doesn't have a brightness problem
-the cracked paint texture in the tut looks nice because its so small you can see the texture, but in yours its like giant cuts or bad lightning or something
-the emblem thing you picked is pretty boring as well


here's v2:



and v1 just for a comparison:




i think i fixed most of the problems you mentioned.
i realized that the cracked texture I was using didn't have an effect on the black because of the original colour of the texture stock so I used a completely different one.
I think it turned out a lot better

maybe too dark though? :/
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Sep 14 2011 03:38pm
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Sep 14 2011 08:13pm)
i dont have unclemuscles start, but here is the finished mr odin
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=MSLAC3S6


ooh spiffy thx dear

Quote (Vigar @ Sep 14 2011 07:57pm)
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=48822549&f=105
PSDs for left side third down and right side fifth down would be amazing to see how you did these tags. I've always wondered about these two among your current.


i don't have em anymore :(
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Sep 14 2011 04:18pm
Quote (nerobellum @ Sep 14 2011 06:27am)
link me those psds pls, i lost them with reformat and tummeh sucks and didn't pay for cz anymore


I can send it to you, but your inbox is full
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Sep 14 2011 04:45pm
Quote (theOHMS @ Sep 14 2011 04:58pm)
here's v2:

http://i51.tinypic.com/308aa0g.png

and v1 just for a comparison:
http://i56.tinypic.com/1jr9zk.png



i think i fixed most of the problems you mentioned.
i realized that the cracked texture I was using didn't have an effect on the black because of the original colour of the texture stock so I used a completely different one.
I think it turned out a lot better

maybe too dark though? :/


Do you see how obviously better it is now?
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Sep 14 2011 04:53pm
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Sep 14 2011 06:45pm)
Do you see how obviously better it is now?


i thought so but when I work on a piece (of whatever, not only sigs. english assignments, etc.) it's hard sometimes to step aside and analyze your own work.
plus i'm a noob.

thanks <3
i will be most likely doing another psd recreation
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Sep 14 2011 07:08pm
Bout to completely restart. same stock though :) wanna do good on this shit
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