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mamllee

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#51

Jun 30 2011 04:25am

Quote (Quotax @ Jun 30 2011 12:17pm)

well lets check back on my latest sig:

http://i684.photobucket.com/albums/vv210/Quotax/signew3small.jpg

- rule of thirds? CHECK
- flow of the render? CHECK
- all objects share same light source? CHECK
- everything matching the overall look? CHECK
- put some fancy effects in? CHECK
- choose a nice colorscheme? CHECK

so now go ahead and tell me where to greatly improve myself

srsly u are just a bunch of trashtalkers, whereas 90% of you even cant do better than me. im amused...

the flow is very sloppy, that c4d in front of her face and the lines in the background dont help that. Its chaotic, my eyes can recognize a focal; the face, that star in the corner, the text, various spots onthe c4d. The colors are very unappealing and dull. Its extremely flat and seriously lacks quality (doesnt look crisp). The lighting is all over the place, which also makes the tag look even flatter. The typography is extremely unappealing and not only does it not blend with the rest of the piece, it doesnt build on it as any typography should, it only takes away from it.

worst of all, you arent accepting that you have such room for improvement. If you really want to, you can make the most of the advice you get here and improve drastically, its totally up to you.

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#52

Jun 30 2011 04:35am

Quote (Quotax @ Jun 30 2011 06:05am)

who doesnt need improvement?

edit: browsed through ur sigs.... u are not allowd to talk either, sry bro

how is this not allowed to talk?

mamllee

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#53

Jun 30 2011 04:38am

Quote (melodude @ Jun 30 2011 12:35pm)

http://i849.photobucket.com/albums/ab54/mamllee2/coffey-1.png

how is this not allowed to talk?

It doesnt matter, everyone is allowed to talk

im not saying im better or worse, im just offering advice

Cryptography

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#54

Jun 30 2011 04:47am

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Quote (mamllee @ 30 Jun 2011 12:38)

It doesnt matter, everyone is allowed to talk

im not saying im better or worse, im just offering advice

as mentioned before in some other thread, fucking retards can't appreciate anything you have to offer.
I don't see a reason why would anyone be helpful towards people like OP.

on topic, the fact is that while you applied all the "rules" on your junk, it still looks like shit. Improve or not, no one gives a fuck tho.

Awer

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#55

Jun 30 2011 05:08am

There is always room for improvement and the advice given here is really, really useful. These guys know a lot about graphic design and have a lot of experience within that field. Some of the advice may be harsh, but its the fastest possible way to learn

sicklad

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#56

Jun 30 2011 05:36am

Quote (Quotax @ Jun 30 2011 09:17pm)

well lets check back on my latest sig:

http://i684.photobucket.com/albums/vv210/Quotax/signew3small.jpg

- rule of thirds? TEXT IS OUTTA PLACE
- flow of the render? SORTA
- blending the render well in? CHECK
- all objects share same light source? ALL OBJECTS HAVE NO DEFINITION OF LIGHT SOURCE
- everything matching the overall look? Background is weird.
- put some fancy effects in? C4D <> fancy effect
- choose a nice colorscheme? NO

so now go ahead and tell me where to greatly improve myself

srsly u are just a bunch of trashtalkers, whereas 90% of you even cant do better than me. im amused...

Fix'd.

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#57

Jun 30 2011 05:57am

Posting in a god status thread.

Quotax

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#58

Jun 30 2011 06:36am

Quote (melodude @ 30 Jun 2011 12:35)

how is this not allowed to talk?

- focal is in the top right corner (thirds - no check)
- c4d renders dont match the style of the girl at all, they are sharp, futuristic while the girl is ordinary and clean with more round and curvy shapes
- simply its just random stuff all put together

though the overall look is not that bad due to the matchin colorscheme...

and its the only one of his sigs thats kinda appealing:

the other ones:

sry but they aint any better than mine, imho i think theyre worse - but thats just my personal taste after all.

@sicklad: u should be aware of the fact, that the lightsource is actually in the top right corner which u can see at the shadows of the objects that are all lefthanded and the colorscheme is matchin and nice (complementary colors, if u didnt notice)
just because u dont like the colors, doesnt mean the colorscheme isnt nice...

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#59

Jun 30 2011 06:40am

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sicklad

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#60

Jun 30 2011 06:47am

Quote (Quotax @ Jun 30 2011 11:36pm)

http://i849.photobucket.com/albums/ab54/mamllee2/coffey-1.png

- focal is in the top right corner (thirds - no check)
- c4d renders dont match the style of the girl at all, they are sharp, futuristic while the girl is ordinary and clean with more round and curvy shapes
- simply its just random stuff all put together

though the overall look is not that bad due to the matchin colorscheme...

and its the only one of his sigs thats kinda appealing:

the other ones:
http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/8088/gimpgallery.png

sry but they aint any better than mine, imho i think theyre worse - but thats just my personal taste after all.

@sicklad: u should be aware of the fact, that the lightsource is actually in the top right corner which u can see at the shadows of the objects that are all lefthanded and the colorscheme is matchin and nice (complementary colors, if u didnt notice)
just because u dont like the colors, doesnt mean the colorscheme isnt nice...

inb4 he says that the b/w in this photograph is used incorrectly or some bullshit.

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