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Sep 1 2010 10:27pm
Quote (emuu @ Sep 1 2010 09:16pm)
like i've said before, i think you should go back a few steps and learn the basics. i'm only saying this to help you.

the perspective is totally off. it looks a bit surreal, the far end of the beach is heading off vertically at a weird angle.
the composition is pretty flat and unsatisfying. it lacks detail and a spicy focal (or two..).
the colours are rather dull (tho not bad), expand your palette.
use references when you're stuck, realism.

ps. large brushes.


Lol, so awesome.
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Quote (AbDuCt @ Sep 2 2010 12:26am)
if your happy and you know it...

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If you're happy and you know it, UPGRADE TO PRO TODAY? First I've heard this version
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Sep 1 2010 10:28pm
OP, you need to learn linear perspective.

google how to do one, two, and three point perspective pieces.

then use some photoshop templates that have the perspective grid lines to make your pieces.
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Sep 1 2010 10:28pm
just realized this isn't gen chat, sorry uncle for my spam in this thread.
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Sep 1 2010 10:29pm
Quote (Asilia @ Sep 1 2010 10:28pm)
just realized this isn't gen chat, sorry uncle for my spam in this thread.


lol i was wondering.... keep going.
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Sep 1 2010 10:30pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Sep 2 2010 12:59am)
lol i was wondering.... keep going.


okay wher are we ah yes

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If you happy and you know it....
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Sep 1 2010 10:30pm
is he even reading any of these constructive posts about how to improve?

god damn
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Sep 1 2010 10:31pm
Quote (Flips1de @ Sep 2 2010 01:00am)
is he even reading any of these constructive posts about how to improve?

god damn


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Sep 1 2010 10:31pm
Quote (Flips1de @ Sep 1 2010 10:30pm)
is he even reading any of these constructive posts about how to improve?

god damn


yes i jsut read yours, btw where ar ethe templates for the perspective linear lines?
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Sep 1 2010 10:38pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Sep 2 2010 04:31am)
yes i jsut read yours, btw where ar ethe templates for the  perspective linear lines?


ahh...for some reason i cant find them at the moment, i had some at one point in time...

its good to create your own, if you know how. 2 point perspective is the most commonly used one, and best to learn. you should probably stay away from 3 and 4 point for a bit.

there are tutorials on how to do it, just google two point perspective.
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