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Jun 24 2013 01:12am
too much trendy,

break it down,

ask why you did each thing,

what does it achieve,

and then ask what you want it to achieve.
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Jun 24 2013 01:27am
Quote (WhyteLinux @ Jun 24 2013 03:12am)
too much trendy,

break it down,

ask why you did each thing,

what does it achieve,

and then ask what you want it to achieve.


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Just doing this for a learning experience really.
Once I get something I like and I'm happy with and I say that I personally made it I want to recreate the letters separately and get them printed on a canvas.
4 canvases. 1 for each letter.

Why I did each thing?
There wasn't really much done.
Texture was added because the letters on a blank back/grey background looked too boring to me and it was the easiest way to get rid of that problem.
The way the text is written is to show that it's bold, just really liked how it looks.
The design in the text I just thought looked really cool and colorful. Nothing else do that really.
I'm not sure I'm happy with the text "design" being where it is. I added it to show that I personally made this and that it is my creation.

I'm thinking about removing it from that spot though and maybe making it look engraved into the wall above "AVID"


Not sure what you meant by your post at all.. but um.... ya.

Edit: http://imageshack.us/a/img163/5571/90td.jpg ???


This post was edited by Avid on Jun 24 2013 01:41am
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Jun 24 2013 02:58am
reflection is still wrong lololololololol
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Jun 24 2013 03:13am
Quote (Nereaux @ Jun 24 2013 04:58am)
reflection is still wrong lololololololol


:( halp.
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Jun 24 2013 05:39am
Quote (Avid @ Jun 24 2013 08:13pm)
:( halp.


The bottom right of the A defs shouldn't have the edge clipped like that.
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Jun 24 2013 06:04am
Quote (sicklad @ Jun 24 2013 07:39am)
The bottom right of the A defs shouldn't have the edge clipped like that.


I thought about this.
Though I wasn't exactly sure about it and I don't know how I'd fix it.

I'll have to try out some stuff later.

Does that go for the " I " as well?


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Jun 24 2013 06:14am
Quote (Avid @ Jun 24 2013 11:04pm)
I thought about this.
Though I wasn't exactly sure about it and I don't know how I'd fix it.

I'll have to try out some stuff later.

Does that go for the " I " as well?


Yeah. The clipping implies elevation.
Also noticed the strokes are going in the wrong direction.
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Jun 24 2013 07:44am
Quote (sicklad @ Jun 24 2013 08:14am)
Yeah. The clipping implies elevation.
Also noticed the strokes are going in the wrong direction.


Should I have the reflection the same way as the stokes in AVID and going up the wall?
After looking at the image again that came to mind. Not sure if I should go ahead and do that though.
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Jun 24 2013 07:53am
Quote (Avid @ Jun 25 2013 12:44am)
Should I have the reflection the same way as the stokes in AVID and going up the wall?
After looking at the image again that came to mind. Not sure if I should go ahead and do that though.


Well, a reflection in nature would have the strokes going the same way.

Also another thing that's kind of bothering me are the inner edges. There's no angle change on the stroke, the edge is done purely with lighting. Ruins the 3D look for me.
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Jun 24 2013 08:19am
Quote (sicklad @ Jun 24 2013 09:53am)
Well, a reflection in nature would have the strokes going the same way.

Also another thing that's kind of bothering me are the inner edges. There's no angle change on the stroke, the edge is done purely with lighting. Ruins the 3D look for me.


The edges of the text before the bend?
I'll work on that on the next piece if I end up doing this look again.
Not sure how I would change that because of how I originally made it though.

I'll try that reflection stuff later though.
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