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May 18 2012 09:42am
ok about the signature, keep practicing, but I would recommend switching it up, because I don't think you will learn anything more from this "style"
This just looks like a 4 layer tag with a smudged render, a render, a c4d and a gradient map.
This isn't to say that great tags have many layers, or that you need to spend a great deal of time on a great tag, it's just I can pick out exactly what you did pretty easily,
and it's not super appealing.
Keep practicing, but some advice. Try to pick renders that have a lot of flow, if you don't know what that means I can send you a tut to show you.
You've done a good job not centering focals, keep it up.

When people are talking about smudge they are refering to this: http://forums.d2jsp.org/img.php?x=274471


Here's some tuts I would read: (the odin one is down, so if he reuploads it, read his,
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=50972641&f=105
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=38892211&f=246
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=47808645&f=105

edit: wrong placement of links

This post was edited by Melodude on May 18 2012 09:54am
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May 18 2012 09:46am
Quote (Melodude @ May 18 2012 03:42pm)
ok about the signature, keep practicing, but I would recommend switching it up, because I don't think you will learn anything more from this "style"
This just looks like a 4 layer tag with a smudged render, a render, a c4d and a gradient map.
This isn't to say that great tags have many layers, or that you need to spend a great deal of time on a great tag, it's just I can pick out exactly what you did pretty easily,
and it's not super appealing.
Keep practicing, but some advice. Try to pick renders that have a lot of flow, if you don't know what that means I can send you a tut to show you.
You've done a good job not centering focals, keep it up.

When people are talking about smudge they are refering to this: http://forums.d2jsp.org/img.php?x=274471
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=38892211&f=246
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=47808645&f=105

Here's some tuts I would read: (the odin one is down, so if he reuploads it, read his,
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=50972641&f=105


lol you pretty much counted every singel thing i did to make that tag, your like a photoshop whisperer :wacko:, i tried to look at odins tut bit it comes out so small its unreadable :(
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May 18 2012 03:51pm
Quote (Golden_star @ May 18 2012 11:46am)
lol you pretty much counted every singel thing i did to make that tag, your like a photoshop whisperer  :wacko:, i tried to look at odins tut bit it comes out so small its unreadable :(


read further into the thread, its reposted larger.
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May 18 2012 05:19pm
Quote (FloraFreak @ May 18 2012 09:51pm)
read further into the thread, its reposted larger.


not for meh
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May 19 2012 12:43pm
gradient map looks bad, c4d is blatantly..a c4d try to make it look not so much like a c4d. text is just stupid looking
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Quote (Nomonitor @ May 19 2012 10:43am)
gradient map looks bad, c4d is blatantly..a c4d  try to make it look not so much like a c4d.  text is just stupid looking


that sig is cool
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Jun 3 2012 03:49pm
blending :)
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