first whip @ lesson 3
will be repeating this a bit more today

iso feedback from sensei

Nice first try.
Do some more with different shapes and don't stick too close to the mini-tut.

Pm'd you regarding my situation.
Wasn't even able to get on here to see that there was a deadline.
I appreciate the help that you have given me up to this point, but I am disappointed that I was kicked when I had no way of preventing it.
As you can see I have a 10% which came with a 24 hour suspension. Which was given to me right when you announced the deadline...

I'll send you the .psd via pm

I'm going to try another one later today, as I can think of a bunch of stuff I could do better on this.

Pm'd, I hope you make use of your last chance.




Want me to cnc it anyway or do you want to make your fixes first?

GO ahead and cnc, I'm not going to fix this one I'm going to start a new one.
If i were to cnc it myself I would say. Stay away from the white lighting. Use more colour,
It's too dark, Use more layers, and the white smudges don't really look all that great.

You hit the nail on the head.

Aside from the points you already noticed yourself:
- it's oversharpened
- lacks details because of the very few single-colored smudge layers
- render needs better blending

Added again.


Students (Updated):

1. Avicii (L2)
2. AWER (L2)
3. Melodude (L3)
4. Reload (L2)

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Can I get L2?