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Sep 14 2011 07:47am
original

mine



Quote (killkillkillkil @ Sep 13 2011 10:49pm)
oh its none of those
those are my versions
i'll have to find it cause i forgot the name of it lewl

http://i.imgur.com/ejVX3.jpg

there is original
yah mine sucks
got tired of drawing lines and it originally started with pentooling but i started with c4d
yah i failed
afk qq


I have that set sitting around somewhere as well, its so good.

This post was edited by melodude on Sep 14 2011 07:47am
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Sep 14 2011 08:34am
Quote (nerobellum @ Sep 14 2011 03:27am)
link me those psds pls, i lost them with reformat and tummeh sucks and didn't pay for cz anymore


im not sure which psds were from that pack
if you have any specific ones i could give you em
or maybe melo could help you
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Quote (melodude @ Sep 14 2011 09:47am)
original http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/9932/xprophet.jpg

mine http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/4598/halo2.png

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/1853/halong.png



I have that set sitting around somewhere as well, its so good.


ill be honest, the tut seems kind of simple but I do like your result a lot
+the composition makes it feel nice as well, its like hes in some jungle or something which is cool
+i like the focal and the render placement
+the effects aren't distracting but they are clearly there and help to add to the depth of it
+colors are pretty good, lighting isnt really bad, but could maybe use some work so its not so flat (looks like its just a sort of circle from above or something)

This post was edited by TheReborn_Magi on Sep 14 2011 08:46am
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Sep 14 2011 10:22am
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Sep 14 2011 04:46pm)
ill be honest, the tut seems kind of simple but I do like your result a lot
+the composition makes it feel nice as well, its like hes in some jungle or something which is cool
+i like the focal and the render placement
+the effects aren't distracting but they are clearly there and help to add to the depth of it
+colors are pretty good, lighting isnt really bad, but could maybe use some work so its not so flat (looks like its just a sort of circle from above or something)


Ýou forgot to mention the quality.
To me it looks somewhat Lq or grainy.
Depth looks messed up imo.
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Sep 14 2011 10:27am
Quote (TzL @ Sep 14 2011 12:22pm)
Ýou forgot to mention the quality.
To me it looks somewhat Lq or grainy.
Depth looks messed up imo.


i suppose there is a slight hint of lq but it didnt really bother me that much
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Sep 14 2011 10:29am
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Sep 14 2011 06:27pm)
i suppose there is a slight hint of lq but it didnt really bother me that much


It allways bothers me. But I gotta say that its probably that lightings fault.
That huge softbrush usually have this effect, and yet ppl continues to use it.
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Sep 14 2011 10:48am
Quote (TzL @ Sep 14 2011 12:29pm)
It allways bothers me. But I gotta say that its probably that lightings fault.
That huge softbrush usually have this effect, and yet ppl continues to use it.


yeah the lighting is definitely the biggest problem for me here
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Sep 14 2011 11:32am
yah it does look very noisy
but it does look nice
could use better lighting and adjustment layers
(already mentioned)
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Sep 14 2011 11:44am
random post is random.

This post was edited by Ctrlaltkick on Sep 14 2011 11:58am
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Quote (Ctrlaltkick @ Sep 14 2011 07:44pm)
This is week #2s because i couldnt get to the tut for #3 :(

http://i.imgur.com/99YFK.jpg


I believe there was no tut for 3, you'r sposed to learn from .psd's?
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