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#41
Dec 29 2010 02:09pm
Quote (AbDuCt @ Dec 28 2010 10:26pm)
i can't comment because i'm jelly i can't do it.

teeth/nose is i a bit weird but the rest look bomb. looks like a 8bit nes game schematic insert.


General comments are fine, I'm not looking for in depth critique all the time.

Quote (UncleMuscles @ Dec 28 2010 11:54pm)
vn1...... !

eye structure/frame still looks a LITTLE off on the right side...  well the skulls left side... nawmean?

still looks a little tilted/skewed ?


Yeah, I see what ya mean. I messed around with it some more, it probably still looks off though.

Quote (humari @ Dec 29 2010 12:12pm)
the progression looks awsome u shud keep adding to it looks cool to see how it evolves


edit: perspective is still a bit off, the details r looking really good so its masking it. IMO u shud make another big tooth that extends down on the rightside of the face and make the right eye socket a bit bigger


I'll make an update to the gif after I've done a little bit more.

Okay, so I messed around with the teeth/eye/nose parts to hopefully fix the perspective/skew issues. It still looks off, but I think it does look slightly better now. I've decided to move on though, I want to start working on texturing and additional details and shadows.
Also thinking about adding a few more colors and adjusting the palette a bit. So far I'm at 9 colors, and I'm not really feeling the palette choice. What do you guys think?




Anyways thanks a lot guys! Keep the feedback coming.
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#42
Dec 29 2010 02:10pm
looking very sexy
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#43
Dec 29 2010 02:10pm
lookuing better, imo the bottom " brow " ? of the eye socket should still drop down on OUR right side of the skull
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#44
Dec 29 2010 02:19pm
Quote (171UM @ Dec 28 2010 08:24pm)
pixelated


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Pixel Arting > A Progress Thread

imko it says it all and nb latest version is looking good but i agree with unclemuscles about right brow but looks good so far keep it going

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#45
Dec 29 2010 03:00pm
Quote (shieron @ Dec 29 2010 03:09pm)
General comments are fine, I'm not looking for in depth critique all the time. 



Yeah, I see what ya mean.  I messed around with it some more, it probably still looks off though.



I'll make an update to the gif after I've done a little bit more.

Okay, so I messed around with the teeth/eye/nose parts to hopefully fix the perspective/skew issues.  It still looks off, but I think it does look slightly better now.  I've decided to move on though, I want to start working on texturing and additional details and shadows.
Also thinking about adding a few more colors and adjusting the palette a bit.  So far I'm at 9 colors, and I'm not really feeling the palette choice.  What do you guys think?

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/9705/monster9.png


Anyways thanks a lot guys!  Keep the feedback coming.


awesome now make it animated by drawing a couple other ones with mouth talking or something
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#46
Dec 30 2010 09:05pm
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Dec 29 2010 03:10pm)
looking very sexy

Thanks bruvah

Quote (aotisin @ Dec 29 2010 03:19pm)
rand azz hat read topic

Pixel Arting > A Progress Thread

imko it says it all and nb latest version is looking good but i agree with unclemuscles about right brow but looks good so far keep it going


Quote (UncleMuscles @ Dec 29 2010 03:10pm)
lookuing better,  imo the bottom " brow " ? of the eye socket should still drop down on OUR right side of the skull


Aight, liking all the critique. Appreciate it fellas.
I moved some pixels around on that side again, it's still looking awkward though I'm sure of it. I'm going to move on from that part, right now to me the most glaring adjustment needed is the lower jaw. It looks pretty off, don't ya think?
Anyways, I'm going to just keep on going with this. I'm kind of anxious to add the rest of the body. Here's where I'm currently at:



I changed the background to black, I want it to appear that this monster/demon/nemesis/power ranger zombie/licker is emerging from the darkness and I think it's easier to tell in this context
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#47
Dec 30 2010 09:06pm
awesome progress
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#48
Dec 30 2010 09:18pm
latest post looks way better.

not sure if eye sockets are completed yet but they seem empty/weird

are you using a reference from this or going freestyle on this?
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#49
Dec 30 2010 10:08pm
yeah eye socket brow angle is off
looks like his right eye is a giant droopy one. remember form that angle, right eye socket will not be fully visible so it should not be as wide as the left. as far as brow angle, right eye needs to come up, youve got it at maybe a 25-30 angle and you want it around 40.
other than that looks great, i would never have the patience for that :P
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#50
Dec 30 2010 11:43pm
Fuck, I knew this was going to happen. I did another quick edit, does it look better? I think the way I angled this thing is really fucking me up

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