Lightsource is to strongggggggggggg.
Simmer it down and add some more depht.

It has depth, but you can't see the corner that the light source comes out of.

Lighting ruins the depht.
Also text = nono

This. You need to stay away from that kind of text as well. That thick pentool is kind of bad and it looks like you have a c4d on screen or something (can look really bad sometimes), whatever that sort of white shape is in the right corner. Just do some more tutorials m8.

Tutorials #1. Always room to improve

I do follow tutorials, but I like to mix and match them.

ya ofc, always good to add your own style.

Anyway im out for abit, ill leave you with this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qTGA_YvJ6kQ

True m8. Something that I noticed though is that there are barely any tutorials on the really nice tags. It takes a lot of searching to find tutorials that can actually teach you something new sometimes.

Yuck... Listen to harder rock music! Or atleast better evenescence!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FT8qPtEY0cY

Fromage, less talk and make me a gift.