Would appreciate suggestions as opposed to empty criticism. There's a fine line between constructive and negative.

They're all things you shouldn't do, and the reasons would've been stated before in this thread.

Colours - There's no yellow or orange on the render or in the background, so why is there orange pen tooling and yellow "lights"?

Pen tooling - flow is all over the place, colours are ugly.

Random image - no idea what you're trying to add here.

It just looks like you slapped on a bunch of stuff with very little though as to why it's there and how it fits.

http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=67913837&f=246

Go back, read the composition tutorials thoroughly.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/UHzGkba.jpg[/img]

Picked up ps after a few years of inactivity, how'd i go?

edit: why is my img code not working

This post was edited by feliciaday on Oct 9 2013 04:31pm

Stop hijacking his thread

ooooh, thats almost really cool

i missed this one, but i like it a lot

Been a while since i've seen you post in my thread, was a pleasant surprise ^_^. Yeah i think the first has flow issues which i constantly try to grasp but can't seem to execute properly and thank you on the 2nd one.



Actually did and tried to find a few flow/compo guidelines myself. Not sure how i'll do with the information doe.

That light source at her belly is all wrong hence most of the shadows are on her belly.
Should have hit from above.
Also that beige background aint helping.

I like the pink/Purple stuff and that render looks good. But the rest is random.

Also a lined version since i like doing these things lol.

This post was edited by LostInMyMind on Oct 16 2013 04:15am